The feedback i received from my teacher was to make the left hand column of my model, where the headings are, more full as at the moment it seems empty and not a lot content is there. I also need to make it more clear that the articles adjacent to the headings on the right link up, this isn't made totally clear and so i need to change this. To do this i will probably put a box going behind him through to the other side with the writing on the same box to make it very clear that the heading and article description is linked. I should change the house style as i changed it on my front page and to make it more consistent it all needs to match. So on my next draft i will make it matching. I was also told that the photo's could be changed to make them seem more appropriate for a music magazine. I will probably change the pictures to more artistic ones of a friend, and music tickets i take a picture of to make them look more appropriate for the type of magazine.Thursday, 17 March 2016
Contents page - Second Draft Feedback
Contents page - Second Draft Feedback
The feedback i received from my teacher was to make the left hand column of my model, where the headings are, more full as at the moment it seems empty and not a lot content is there. I also need to make it more clear that the articles adjacent to the headings on the right link up, this isn't made totally clear and so i need to change this. To do this i will probably put a box going behind him through to the other side with the writing on the same box to make it very clear that the heading and article description is linked. I should change the house style as i changed it on my front page and to make it more consistent it all needs to match. So on my next draft i will make it matching. I was also told that the photo's could be changed to make them seem more appropriate for a music magazine. I will probably change the pictures to more artistic ones of a friend, and music tickets i take a picture of to make them look more appropriate for the type of magazine.
The feedback i received from my teacher was to make the left hand column of my model, where the headings are, more full as at the moment it seems empty and not a lot content is there. I also need to make it more clear that the articles adjacent to the headings on the right link up, this isn't made totally clear and so i need to change this. To do this i will probably put a box going behind him through to the other side with the writing on the same box to make it very clear that the heading and article description is linked. I should change the house style as i changed it on my front page and to make it more consistent it all needs to match. So on my next draft i will make it matching. I was also told that the photo's could be changed to make them seem more appropriate for a music magazine. I will probably change the pictures to more artistic ones of a friend, and music tickets i take a picture of to make them look more appropriate for the type of magazine.
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