Peer and Teacher Marking
My work was peer marked by George Hardy, he said that to improve i need to show more organisation of my props, actors, locations, and props. To act on this i am going to get a picture of all the props and costumes i used on my photo-shoot to analyse and show more organisation. I should also organise the locations to show where i did my pictures to make them appear like they were taken in more impressive locations. My teacher marking said that i need to use a greater variety of digital ICT and proof reading to improve my grade, to work on this i will go back and proof read my work and add more detail and correct any mistakes i did not originally notice. I also need to go back and reference any websites i used in my work otherwise it's plagiarism, i have not copied any text from any websites on blog however i will include the websites i got the information off to make my work more professional. I need to state how my work is relevant to my final outcome and to check what I've done so far off the checklist so i know where I'm at and i can audit my work more.
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